A Doctor Who message board fic. Nope, no kidding
This has been sitting around on my hard drive for ages. I figured it was about time it actually got posted.
Title: Stop the planet, I want to get off
Author: sarah531
Rating: PG
Characters: Well, see how many canon characters you can spot.
Summary: ‘I am now seriously considering throwing myself off a Manchester office block- this time of my own free will.’ A bunch of Syrorax survivors, plus some familiar faces, chat in an online forum. And argue.
A/N: I suspect this is partly the fault of drakyndra‘s rant about post-Christmas Invasion fic. ;)
Stop The Planet, I Want To Get Off
Subject: Another new member
Posted: 21st January, 2007
by lynnie25
Hi, everyone. My name’s Lynnie- I’ve been looking everywhere for a community to join and this one seemed the best because of the small amount of members (nothing against those who are a member of the big communities too).
Got nothing original to say here, really. My husband tells me I was on the roof of an office block in Manchester- he drove me to it the next day and pointed it out. It feels like a dream, it really does.
RE: Another new member
Posted: 21st January, 2007
by linden
Welcome, lynnie. Nice to see someone actually using the introductions board- most people just jump straight in. I’m linden, general moderator.
I was on top of a public library. All I remember is waking up and wondering why I was surrounded by people and half of them were crying.
RE: Another new member
Posted: 21st January, 2007
by shelly
All I remember is wondering why i was on the same roof as my ex boyfriend!!!
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Subject: Jones, the US, etc
Posted: 22nd January 2007
by fifteenmarsbars
Turn on your TVs right now, everyone.
She’s staying-it’s confirmed- plus, our dear President is in very serious trouble. Actually, no- let’s just say that every government in every country is in very serious trouble.
RE: Jones, the US, etc
Posted: 22nd January 2007
by summerof2004
They would have to be MAD to make her go. Mad, mad, mad. Concerns for her health just SHOULDN’T BE AN ISSUE.
RE: Jones, the US, etc
Posted: 22nd January 2007
by lynnie25
That’s the thing, though- she saved our lives- saved our lives singlehandedly! Can you imagine what the woman must be feeling?! That’s more responsibilty then anyone should ever have. The only reason there are concerns about her health is that they don’t want her to keep pushing herself- they’re grateful to her, so grateful that they want her to have some time off.
If I was her, I’d take it.
RE: Jones, the US, etc
Posted: 22nd January 2007
by snakey
Nah, Lynnie, that’s not it. It’s jealousy. They (just ‘they’ in general) can’t stand the idea that one woman saved all their worthless little lives.
RE: Jones, the US, etc
Posted: 22nd January 2007
by fifteenmarsbars
And *your* worthless little life.
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Subject: THE DOCTOR [locked]
Posted: 22nd January 2007
by thomas_f
i would like links to all dicusion about this, please?
RE: THE DOCTOR [locked]
Posted: 22nd January 2007
by SJS
Here you are: http://www.s-t-a-r-s.com/forums/showthread.php?2142315126
That’s the main one- there is also http://www.s-t-a-r-s.com/forums/showthread.php?2091351215184, which contains all the links to all the discussion across the board, and other websites. I put it together myself.
Hope that helps you.
RE: THE DOCTOR [locked]
Posted: 22nd January 2007
by linden
Well, you’ve got your links- I’m going to close the thread now, and posting those links in sticky threads is a good idea, I’m beginning to think.
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Subject: Social thread
Posted: 23rd January 2007
by badwolf
I thought it was about time we had one. Some of us might have things in common. TV shows or bands or…knitting or something.
RE: Social thread
Posted: 23rd January 2007
by fifteenmarsbars
This is a good idea!
So…who’s going to watch series 4 of Lost? Man, they’re going to run out of cliffhangers soon.
RE: Social thread
Posted: 23rd January 2007
by summerof2004
I stopped watching after they killed three of the main characters off in one go at the end of series 3, then had to bring them back because the outcry was so great.
RE: Social thread
Posted: 23rd January 2007
by shelly
LOL I remember that.
RE: Social thread
Posted: 23rd January 2007
by badwolf
I don’t watch TV anymore. It’s like the aliens crept into everything, and we don’t have anything to call our own anymore. We aren’t our own anymore.
RE: Social thread
Posted: 23rd January 2007
by SJS
Badwolf, may I ask where you got your name?
RE: Social thread
Posted: 23rd January 2007
by badwolf
I saw a sig once that was just ‘BAD WOLF’ and I thought it was cool, so I used it.
RE: Social thread
Posted: 23rd January 2007
by fifteenmarsbars
BAD WOLF used to be written on the outside of Tesco’s, where I live. I think it’s the name of a video game or movie or something, or maybe it’s just one of those meme things gangs of teenagers do.
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Subject: STARS
Posted: 23rd January 2007
by lynnie25
Right. What does it stand for? I’ve clicked around the site and can’t find out- maybe you need an ‘about’ page?
RE: STARS
Posted: 23rd January 2007
by linden
STARS- Sycorax Talk for A-Positive Realistic Seekers. It’s dire, but it’s all I had to go on.
There will be an about page eventually, but I’m a little busy.
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Subject: Movies
Posted: 24th January 2007
by snakey
One day there will be a Sycorax Day movie. That much should be obvious. It will probably feature a star-studded cast, a rousing score, and a massive CGI spaceship. Maybe just to entertain us, they’ll throw in a couple of things that didn’t really happen, like a swordfight or a romantic subplot or more, different aliens battling it out for Earth! I’ll go see it, I think, and throw popcorn at the screen.
RE: Movies
Posted: 24th January 2007
by fifteenmarsbars
Stop calling it Sycorax Day! It was Christmas day! Doesn’t anyone remember Christmas?
RE: Movies
Posted: 24th January 2007
by lynnie25
I remember Christmas, but the world has changed so much…
^ understatement of the century
RE: Movies
Posted: 24th January 2007
by incredible1
God, we’re all a bunch of pussies. They took everything away. Took away our sanity, our lives, everything we value. Took away Christmas, our day of peace, and we’re not doing anything! We need to ******* build a spaceship and get our revenge.
RE: Movies
Posted: 24th January 2007
by incredible1
Why won’t it let me say ****?
RE: Movies
Posted: 24th January 2007
by linden
I set it up to filter out swear words.
RE: Movies
Posted: 24th January 2007
by incredible1
Well, I don’t care. I hate them for what they did. This isn’t coming across properly, because you’re only reading it on a board instead of actually hearing me, but-
I hate them. We blew them up, but how do we know more of them won’t come back? We need to get into space, and destroy the aliens. I’m so angry I can hardly think– we weren’t meant for this. Aliens didn’t exist just a month or two ago and now here we are, and I hate it.
We need to destroy every single alien.
RE: Movies
Posted: 24th January 2007
by SJS
Destroy every single alien?
RE: Movies
Posted: 24th January 2007
by incredible1
That’s what I said, lady.
WHY AREN’T WE DOING THAT NOW? Why aren’t there MORE riots? Why isn’t there more chaos? WHY ARE WE JUST SITTING AROUND AND GETTING ON WITH OUR LIVES LIKE NOTHING HAPPENED?
RE: Movies
Posted: 24th January 2007
by lynnie25
Maybe because we can’t handle this. God knows I can’t.
RE: Movies
Posted: 24th January 2007
by jamie
Vaguely back on topic for a second: is anyone else currently suffering difficulty getting hold of movies such as ET, Close Encounters Of The Third Kind, Mars Attacks, Independence Day and War of the Worlds?
;)
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Subject: Roll call
Posted: 25th January 2007
by linden
I have banned incredible1. I agree with some of what he says, but I just can’t deal with it right now- all the bloody capslock. And, to be honest, he was starting to get on people’s nerves. I think he was the reason SJS and some of the others left.
We’re losing members pretty fast, you may have noticed. If we lose many more we’ll be down to about five, and there’s not much point carrying on with only five. So if you plan to stay, please post.
Bear in mind that if we do close, the offical Alien Victims Support Group (AVSG) is always open -that’s avsg.com -and there’s countless, countless others.
RE: Roll call
Posted: 25th January 2007
by lynnie25
I plan to stay.
RE: Roll call
Posted: 26th January 2007
by jamie
I think SJS left just because she’s busy. I don’t know her or anything, but we exchanged emails and she’s got important work to do, so I gather. Something to do with a school. But incredible1 was annoying me too. A lot.
RE: Roll call
Posted: 26th January 2007
by snakey
What did you want to ban him for? He was offering a valid opinion. Maybe he was right about us all being pussies.
RE: Roll call
Posted: 26th January 2007
by summerof2004
Oh, shut up. Repeat after me: THEY’RE DEAD. THEY WERE BLASTED OUT OF THE SKY. THEY DON’T POSE A THREAT ANYMORE. Now we need to concentrate on rebuilding our lives.
RE: Roll call
Posted: 27th January 2007
by snakey
I’m outta here.
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Subject: I need help [locked]
Posted: 1st February, 2007
by lynnie25
Yesterday my husband left me. Couldn’t take it anymore.
RE: I need help [locked]
Posted: 1st February, 2007
by jacqueline
I’m so sorry, love.
RE: I need help [locked]
Posted: 1st February, 2007
by adam12345
I’m sorry too
RE: I need help [locked]
Posted: 1st February, 2007
by lynnie25
It’s not fair. He said everything had changed, that he was scared all the time now, because I was under control and he wasn’t, and he says he suffered more and can’t I see that? Then he left- ****, he might even have another chick already.
I am now seriously considering throwing myself off a Manchester office block- this time of my own free will.
RE: I need help [locked]
Posted: 1st February 2007
by snakey
Bitch, we’ve all suffered.
RE: I need help [locked]
Posted: 1st February 2007
by linden
I thought you said you were leaving? Either way, you’re banned. Goodbye.
I’m going to lock the thread, lynnie- you can start another one, though, if you like.
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Subject: whoisdoctorwho.co.uk [locked]
Posted: 3rd February
by jacqueline
I’ve been asked to tell people about this, is that alrite?
RE: whoisdoctorwho.co.uk [locked]
Posted: 3rd February
by linden
We’ve all seen it, and we’re not allowed to talk about it. I’ve seen websites shut down for talking about it- it’s off limits. Blame the government, not me.
RE: whoisdoctorwho.co.uk [locked]
Posted: 3rd February
by jacqueline
the government? Blimey, my mate will be pleased to
RE: whoisdoctorwho.co.uk [locked]
Posted: 3rd February
by jacqueline
hear about that. Sorry, pressed enter 2 quickly
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Subject: Concerns
Posted 6th February
by badwolf
Over the past few days I’ve become more and more worried about this site- people have left because they don’t like the way they’ve been treated, anyone offering real information about, you know, THE ALIENS THAT CONTROLLED OUR MINDS is told to take it elsewhere and everyone’s being bitchy. I dunno what to do, so I might leave. Especially considering there’s lots of better message boards. With less stupid names.
RE: Concerns
Posted 6th February
by linden
Well, no-one’s making you stay.
RE: Concerns
Posted 6th February
by summerof2004
I burst out laughing at the ALIENS THAT CONTROLLED OUR MINDS bit and I don’t know why
RE: Concerns
Posted 6th February
by lynnie25
I feel like ****, everyone. I’m probably going to leave.
RE: Concerns
Posted 6th February
by linden
I’m sorry about what happened with your husband, but we are getting a little tired of hearing how you feel.
RE: Concerns
Posted 6th February
by adam12345
That’s not very nice
RE: Concerns
Posted 6th February
by linden
I don’t care. I’m sick of being nice, and so is the rest of the world. Even Harriet Jones is sick of being nice- have you seen the news recently? There could be a war, and not just with aliens either. We’re screwed. Screwed spectacularly. More screwed than anyone has ever been. Niceness is not going to help us. Take it elsewhere.
RE: Concerns
Posted 6th February
by SJS
If we’re ‘screwed spectacularly’ and there’s going to be a war and everything, I think the FIRST thing we need is to be nice to each other.
RE: Concerns
Posted 7th February
by linden
Right. You see the riot on TV right now? On BBC news? Turn your TV on. My uncle died in that riot. He left my three-year-old cousin behind. You got that? I say **** it. We need to fight.
RE: Concerns
Posted 6th February
by jamie
Fight who?
RE: Concerns
Posted 7th February
by linden
****. I’ve had enough. You don’t know what this is like, watching the news and seeing that same footage of people on roofs and buildings all over again. Any day a ship could just come along and think ooh, that planet’s in the way, *boom*. It’s ****ing stupid. I hate it. It’s just unbelieveable and the biggest most important thing ever and NO-ONE KNOWS WHAT TO DO, and the whole planet could die tomorrow and how do you live with that?
RE: Concerns
Posted 7th February
by SJS
I can gurantee that the whole planet will not die tomorrow.
RE: Concerns
Posted 7th February
by linden
Either way- this community has run it’s course.
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Subject: Is there anyone out there?
Posted 2nd April
by SJS
It’s been over a month and the world didn’t end, everybody- you’ve got someone looking out for you.
RE: Is there anyone out there?
Posted 2nd April
by adam12345
but the riots haven’t stopped, and even if there’s not gonna be a war everyone still hates each other or they’re only out for themselves or they want revenge or whatever. No-one can do anything about that.
Stop the planet, I want to get off.
>:(
doyle_sb4
March 15, 2006 @ 8:18 pm
Wow. Just wow. Great spin on TCI and great use of format.
sarah531
March 16, 2006 @ 8:06 am
Thanks. :D Glad you liked it!
livii
March 15, 2006 @ 8:44 pm
I seriously loved this. It’s like, hilarious and kinda sad, too, and 100% what message boards look like, argh. But brilliant in its accuracy. :D
sarah531
March 16, 2006 @ 8:06 am
Thank you. :D
nostalgia_lj
March 15, 2006 @ 8:49 pm
*loves this yay!*
sarah531
March 16, 2006 @ 8:06 am
*grins* Thanks.
pontisbright
March 15, 2006 @ 8:54 pm
Ooh, props to you. Very marvellous indeed.
sarah531
March 16, 2006 @ 8:07 am
Thank you. :)
eilonwyersatz
March 15, 2006 @ 8:57 pm
Ugh, this is amazing. It’s powerful in the way that a lot of fics aren’t, it’s the kind of thing I really like, it’s kind of ‘fly on the wall’. It’s about real people affected by a real incident, it touches you too because it’s so familar. Very unusual format for a fanfiction, but you carried it off so well! V.v.v. impressed.
sarah531
March 16, 2006 @ 8:07 am
Thanks. *grins*
book_addict
March 15, 2006 @ 9:17 pm
I liked that. … but it’s making me feel all twitchy, because I can’t be sure I’ve managed to spot *all* of the canon characters! I don’t want to ruin the fun, but can you tell me how many I should find? I was actually a bit reluctant to read “characters online”-fic, but seeing that you’d written it, I gave it a chance, and am very glad I did :)
sarah531
March 16, 2006 @ 8:08 am
Aw, thank you. *grins* p.s.- if you want to know all the canon characters in the fic, they’re in my reply to the next comment. :)
book_addict
March 17, 2006 @ 4:17 am
Cool. Thanks.
neth_dugan
March 15, 2006 @ 9:47 pm
I spotted Sarah, but then that was kinda obvious… didn’t spot the others. I mean, I saw adam but he’d be too young in this time I think, and then Jamie but he would’ve died centuries ago. And if anyone is reading this before they read the fic – bad on you!
sarah531
March 16, 2006 @ 8:14 am
Yeah, Sarah’s so obviously there that I considered listing her as the main character. :) As for the others…Adam is our Adam, because he’d be about thirteen or fourteen in 2007 if he was around nineteen in 2012. Jamie can be…well, first I thought about making him Jamie from The Doctor Dances, but he’d be about sixty or seventy by then, although it could still be him. Or it can (er, somehow) be companion Jamie if you want…heck, DW’s about time travel after all. ;) jacqueline is Jackie, and thomas_f and incredible1 showed up in another of my fics (it wasn’t a message board one, though) And I think that was it. Unless Rose-as-Bad Wolf counts as a character too, seeing as the message is in someone’s name…;) Thanks for leaving a comment, BTW. :D
packmentality
March 16, 2006 @ 1:28 am
Brilliant! Yay message board fic. The only criticism I have is that board posters so rarely have such good spelling. ;-P
sarah531
March 16, 2006 @ 8:15 am
True. XD (And thanks for reading!)
vilya_mariposa
March 16, 2006 @ 3:36 am
Very nicely done.
sarah531
March 16, 2006 @ 8:15 am
Thanks! :)
qthewetsprocket
March 16, 2006 @ 4:51 am
bravo! excellent work. i shudder to think how many neurotic message board communities you’ve spent time on to capture their mood and character so exactly. loved the ‘sjs’ cameo, although i did wonder how incredible1 and jamie both knew she was a ‘lady’. also loved ‘jacqueline’s’ blonde moment with the enter key. :)
sarah531
March 16, 2006 @ 8:18 am
i shudder to think how many neurotic message board communities you’ve spent time on to capture their mood and character so exactly. *grins* i did wonder how incredible1 and jamie both knew she was a ‘lady’. Good point. Well, I guess she’s got a message board profile, or she had her own introduction thread when she joined. :) Or most likely there were other conversations between her and the others which would have made the fic too long if I wrote them. ;) also loved ‘jacqueline’s’ blonde moment with the enter key. :) Heh, thanks. XD Thanks for leaving a comment. :D
drakyndra
March 16, 2006 @ 11:20 am
Firstly: Another fic inspired by my rant, yayness! Secondly: I very, very much like the format. It’s clever and different, and since I am a sucker for interesting formats, I could not resist the idea of it. And was very true to most message boards I know – though as someone pointed out, rather better spelled. And the characters were fun: I got Sarah and Jackie and Adam right away, which amused me a lot – Adam being a teen emo boy, and Jackie with her lack of computer know-how, and Sarah being all knowledgable, and having to vanish for a school thing. *grins* But it really was a great look at how these really big events affected the ordinary people, in positive and not so positive aways. Also, the comment about adding swordfights to the Sycorax Day movie made me grin liek whoa.
drakyndra
March 16, 2006 @ 12:12 pm
ETA: Also, I have realised I do not as yet have you on my flist. This fact is criminal, and soon to be rectified.
sarah531
March 16, 2006 @ 5:24 pm
Criminal indeed. ;D *adds you back*
sarah531
March 16, 2006 @ 5:26 pm
Thanks very much. :D And was very true to most message boards I know It’s all that time I spend on them. Outpost Gallifrey, for starters… XD
lesserstorm
March 16, 2006 @ 12:45 pm
Fantastic — it starts off looking as if it’s just going to be a bit of fun about how people interact, but it developed into something very much more with a real story about what is going on in the wider world becoming apparent between the interaction on the board
sarah531
March 16, 2006 @ 5:27 pm
Thanks. :D
samantha2074
March 16, 2006 @ 4:57 pm
Excellent job. I think you’ve captured the group dynamics well, which of course means I hate half the posters ;-).
sarah531
March 16, 2006 @ 5:27 pm
;) Thank you.
melata_fic
March 17, 2006 @ 4:41 am
Awesome format for a story, and used so well! *beam* And it really satisfied my craving for aftermath fic.
sarah531
March 17, 2006 @ 7:52 pm
Good. *grins* Thank you for commenting! ;)
golden_blue
March 18, 2006 @ 11:29 am
*grin* Brilliant! To my credit I got Sarah Jane, Adam and Jackie (and wondered about Badwolf, too… ;) ) Got fun images from RE: whoisdoctorwho.co.uk [locked] Posted: 3rd February by jacqueline the government? Blimey, my mate will be pleased to RE: whoisdoctorwho.co.uk [locked] Posted: 3rd February by jacqueline hear about that. Sorry, pressed enter 2 quickly Images of Jackie telling the doctor, not to mention the absolutely wonderful blondeness of it! Kudos!
sarah531
March 18, 2006 @ 11:06 pm
Thanks! :D
lizbee
April 10, 2006 @ 2:29 am
This fic is fantastic. I love the way everyone has their own identifiable voices, and even the characters we only know through this fic become familiar. And the use of the format is inspired. Thanks for a great read.
sarah531
April 10, 2006 @ 9:20 am
You’re very welcome. And thanks for the comment. :D